Nice artwork! Worldbuilding, storyline and telling not bad.
We got a lovely, strong, clever, cursed FL, who almost got assassinated during childhood and who lived with her assassin and later as a slave untill fate lets her cross path again with her childhood sweetheart, a targeted prince, and her brother, his right hand men, again. As of ch 20 noone has recognized each other.
The palace intrigues are okish: a bit over the top regarding that queen (especially since her obsession and log term plans have begun, when she was still a child), a bit too blunt regarding that uncle emperor, but both make good, convincing villains you wish the worst:)
The smut parts are really amusing: usually in R18 stories, the smut is good while the storyline severly lacking – here it’s the opposite – I find myself skipping them xD Might be due to a censored version with cut out panels and painted over clothes. Shame, the (hinted) smut is well integrated in the storyline.
algengrutze
Nice artwork! Worldbuilding, storyline and telling not bad.
We got a lovely, strong, clever, cursed FL, who almost got assassinated during childhood and who lived with her assassin and later as a slave untill fate lets her cross path again with her childhood sweetheart, a targeted prince, and her brother, his right hand men, again. As of ch 20 noone has recognized each other.
The palace intrigues are okish: a bit over the top regarding that queen (especially since her obsession and log term plans have begun, when she was still a child), a bit too blunt regarding that uncle emperor, but both make good, convincing villains you wish the worst:)
The smut parts are really amusing: usually in R18 stories, the smut is good while the storyline severly lacking – here it’s the opposite – I find myself skipping them xD Might be due to a censored version with cut out panels and painted over clothes. Shame, the (hinted) smut is well integrated in the storyline.